tuX1's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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2006-10-10 04:14:28

well.. it was a good attempt

i'm not trying to be mean, just give suggestions:

uhm, the sound wasnt very good half the time i could not understand a word you said. perhaps subtitles or next time you record yourself enunciate (i think thats how you spell..) anyhow, the drawings werent that well done either, real slapstick half assed.. no color and no backgrounds.. the only real good looking drawing is when it did a close up after you said something bout your computer and when someone outside your door was listening.

and i think the random style comedy doesnt really work all that well.. very rarley does it work, and its a hard thing to pull off..

and i dont think blogging would work well here because the people you were mentioning, nobody has any idea who u are talking bout, and seeing as how newgrounds is well, new to you, im assuming those people arent on here to see.

oh and last thing, if drawing isnt a strong point for you, you can excell in other areas to make up for that.. for instance, try lip syncing, there are several tutorials on this site that are very good for telling you how to do this just search lip sync.

you have potential, so i'm looking forward to your next submission, and i would also not recommend posting the other one you made (if too many of your uploads get blammed they start limiting how many submissions you can enter and how often)

short-slow-techno

2006-10-10 04:06:42

i'm sorry i didnt like it

the animation wasnt very well done, simple things that can be done quite basically on swift 3d and imported into flash.

I realize you said it was a slow song but instead of saying dont bitch about it, make it worth while and have the animations sync with the song. i didnt see any sort of movements or transitions that went along with the beat of the song or the changes in the song.

sorry =\

A Unicorn Giggle

2006-10-10 04:03:32

hey nice job.. couple of things tho

sometimes there were no backgrounds, just a blank page, it would add a little bit more if you were to add a setting..

oh and to give it just a little bit more i would suggest doing lip syncing with the voices. there are tutorials on this site just search lip sync

and the sound quality changes quite abruptly sometimes, it's odd.

but either than those small things i thought the story was good , and well executed haha with them all getting unicorns, i expected them to laugh at him and he like.. committed suicide or killed them or something.. iono.. haha nvm.. good job you made me laugh ^_^

funymony responds:

Yes, the sound is a bit weird. It happens when I export it, I guess my sound settings are a bit screwed up.

I'll look into the lip syncing. I didn't give the lip sycing too much effort Because this movie was a two day project. lol. *shakes head* -_-

Glad you enjoyed the silly story.

Thankz for teh review! >=D!

Crooked Evidence

2006-10-10 03:52:33

i'm confused

what you did was very good, i'm a film ethusiast, so i think you did a good job as a film maker..

however..

i think i may have to blam this because this is a real film, not a flash animation which is what this site is for.

oh, and, i would think about perhaps changing the sound effects for the fist fighting hits. they sound extremley fake and i dont think you are looking for laughs in this project.

EmbraceAColdTouch responds:

where can i get better hitting sounds?!!?!

B/W Cartoon About Berries

2005-11-26 22:24:17

wow

all of your cartoons are brilliant, well done, freaky as shit, and excellent.. but after watching a lot of your cartoons i've come to the conclusion that there is something wrong with your brain o.O

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