well.. it was a good attempt

i'm not trying to be mean, just give suggestions:

uhm, the sound wasnt very good half the time i could not understand a word you said. perhaps subtitles or next time you record yourself enunciate (i think thats how you spell..) anyhow, the drawings werent that well done either, real slapstick half assed.. no color and no backgrounds.. the only real good looking drawing is when it did a close up after you said something bout your computer and when someone outside your door was listening.

and i think the random style comedy doesnt really work all that well.. very rarley does it work, and its a hard thing to pull off..

and i dont think blogging would work well here because the people you were mentioning, nobody has any idea who u are talking bout, and seeing as how newgrounds is well, new to you, im assuming those people arent on here to see.

oh and last thing, if drawing isnt a strong point for you, you can excell in other areas to make up for that.. for instance, try lip syncing, there are several tutorials on this site that are very good for telling you how to do this just search lip sync.

you have potential, so i'm looking forward to your next submission, and i would also not recommend posting the other one you made (if too many of your uploads get blammed they start limiting how many submissions you can enter and how often)

i'm sorry i didnt like it

the animation wasnt very well done, simple things that can be done quite basically on swift 3d and imported into flash.

I realize you said it was a slow song but instead of saying dont bitch about it, make it worth while and have the animations sync with the song. i didnt see any sort of movements or transitions that went along with the beat of the song or the changes in the song.

sorry =\

hey nice job.. couple of things tho

sometimes there were no backgrounds, just a blank page, it would add a little bit more if you were to add a setting..

oh and to give it just a little bit more i would suggest doing lip syncing with the voices. there are tutorials on this site just search lip sync

and the sound quality changes quite abruptly sometimes, it's odd.

but either than those small things i thought the story was good , and well executed haha with them all getting unicorns, i expected them to laugh at him and he like.. committed suicide or killed them or something.. iono.. haha nvm.. good job you made me laugh ^_^

uhh

i hope you failed that class

wow wow wow

this game is awesome, nice graphics, nice sound (lol the zombie sounds are funny), nice style, nice everything.. good job

it's good but..

I don't like the sound and in carve mode it's too blocky if you could select different shapes that you can carve that would be better.